ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY ON WRITING ASSESMENT
Chad Barnett, 20 July 1998
Background: Evaluating Critical and Analytical Thinking Skills
across the Curriculum at Linsly
During the spring of 1998, the Headmaster at Linsly (a college prepatory
school) asked me to investigate curriculum designs that promote high scores
on the PSTA, SAT and other standardized assessment tests, improve
students' qualifications for National Merit status, and result in successful
college placement rates. Based on our discussion, I framed
three questions:
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Do Linsly students have a proficient command of language?
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Does our curriculum prepare students for analytical and critical
thinking questions?
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Can Linsly students write well?
Interestingly enough, the final question is perhaps the most important
for three reasons. First, since writing is a visual reflection of a student's
thought process, the most effective way to promote analytical and
critical thinking is by considering more carefully the methods we use to
assign, instruct, and evaluate student composition and rhetoric. Second,
because student writing samples have a more prominent role in the college
admissions process, especially at smaller, more selective schools,
an emphasis on writing across Linsly's curriculum would prepare student
discourse to meet the expectations of the academy. And finally, because
of the new configuration of the PSAT, the percentage of National
Merit Finalists that we have each year will depend greatly on our
students' ability to write well.
Thus, with the understanding that college placement, national
merit status, and critical thinking skills all are contingent upon how
well our students write, I engaged a process that would explain how
we might adjust the curriculum at Linsly in a way that encourages
student writing, meets the expectations of the academy, and
prepares students for the kind of critical thinking abilities demanded
by colleges and universities.
Literally thousands of articles describe writing assessment strategies.
From psychoanalytic evaluation, to self-evaluation, to peer evaluation,
to tape-recorded evaluation, the methods available to teachers are
limited only by the imagination. With this in mind, I limited my research
to assessment, evaluation, and grading strategies that have been
described in academic journals or books during the last two to three
years. Although my annotatation note whether or not I think particular
strategies will work at Linsly, my hope is that the bibliography
can also be used as a general reference for those who are dissatisfied
with the method they are currently using and would like to find literature
on something more current.
Annotated Bibliography
Adkinson, Stephen, and Stephen Tchudi. "Grading on Merit and Achievement:
Where Quality Meets Quantity." Alternatives to Grading Student Writing.
Ed. Stephen Tchudi. Urbana: NCTE, 1997. 192-208.
Using a well reasoned, carefully argued, and convincingly defended
rhetorical style, Adkinson and Tchudi explain the advantages of achievement
grading. Similar to contract grading, achievement grading "awards higher
grades to the students who complete a wider range of work or who go into
ideas and topics in greater depth than their peers"(194). Achievement grading
resembles the integration of the pass/fail system with the traditional
grading system. It is based on three guidelines: (1) All work is 'graded'
credit/no credit (or pass/fail or successful/unsuccessful). (2) The requirements
of credit are stated in terms of tasks or assignments to be completed.
The criteria for credit usually specify both the amount of work to be done
(quantity) and the kind of thoroughness and polish required for acceptance
(quality). The teacher may be the sole determiner of tasks and criteria,
but usually students are involved in the negotiation of both. (3) Students
get points, grades, or other rewards on the basis of how much creditable
work they do.(194-195).
Adkinson and Tchudi have found that a carefully constructed
list of tasks eliminates the need for vague, context-based terms such as
structure, voice, clarity, and specificity (196) and, consequently, students
are able to spend more time working on tasks before them rather than 'figuring
the teacher out'(196). They lend credibility to their achievement grading
system by acknowledging that "there are elements of subjectivity in our
criteria," but that "the critical point is that we have shifted grading
away from the sliding scales (from F to A) and that we describe criteria
in terms of completion of the job rather than abstract rhetorical traits"(200).
While I can't see a complete conversion to achievement grading at Linsly
or in my classroom, I can see the value in it. Specifically, I intend to
use achievement grading for somewhere around 30% of the student's final
grade. Clearly, by shifting the tedium of daily journal responses to an
achievement grading system, the responsibility for personal success will
lie in the hands of the students.
Anderson, Rebecca S., and Bruce W. Speck. "Suggestions for Responding to
the Dilemma of Grading Students' Writing." English Journal January
1997: 21-27.
Through this article, Anderson and Speck attempt to explain
the dilemma faced by teachers who evaluate writing, and to encourage teachers
across the curriculum to "find creative ways to meet the challenge of promoting
growth in the face of grading requirements"(27). Anderson and Speck suggest
that writing teachers discuss the grading dilemma with one another, and
use "grading techniques" that will help students learn (23). This article
provided several examples of evaluation techniques that manage to be both
counterproductive to the best interests of the student and demeaning to
the teacher. Certainly, minimalist grading, as Anderson and Speck describe
it, is the least effective grading strategy mentioned. Neither Anderson
nor Speck endorsed this strategy which necessitates that the teacher use
a check mark, an exclamation point, and the word NO to help students become
better writers (24). To be men and women of letters, but be able to use
no characters other than those three seems more like some form of cruel
punishment than a grading strategy. Cassette grading offers only slightly
more value, but still places too many burdens on students who most likely
don't know they've made mistakes to begin with (24). Faced with similar
problems, collaborative grading calls upon a self-evaluation model that
becomes problematic when students are frustrated because they don't realize
or understand the mistakes they are making. Yet, the independent-evaluator
form of collaborative grading does offer some potential as it takes into
consideration the teacher as coach vs. teacher as evaluator dualism presented
by Peter Elbow in his article, "Embracing Contraries in the Teaching Process."
Finally, the explanation of portfolio grading offered the only useful advice
on alternative grading techniques. Through an analysis of the portfolio,
teachers can observe and determine "the development and growth of the writer's
ability"(25). Furthermore, Anderson supports her endorsement of the portfolio
technique through her reference to Brady and Thaiss' s "What Student Portfolios
are Teaching Us"(25). She quotes from that source, "Students have more
authority, as well as more responsibility, for judging when their work
is ready for evaluation"(25). Here, students are accountable for their
own growth and development, but not their own evaluation. Clearly, much
of this article demonstrates the type of fad grading that could impair
the development of potentially sound academic writers. Yet, Linsly's curriculum
would benefit from a more concentrated effort to make portfolio assessment
a part of classrooms in all disciplines.
Bloom, Lynn Z. "Why I (Used to) Hate to Give Grades." College Composition
and Communication 48 (1997): 360-371.
When she began writing this article, Lynn Bloom wanted to address the
question, "How can we grade writing in which the writers have laid their
lives on the line?" During the first half of the essay, Bloom indicates
several problems with the practice of grading as we have come to know it.
She argues that grades are misleading because they serve as an administrative
convenience that fills a form rather than explaining content. She explains
that grades look precise and objective but are not, and that they not only
label papers, but they label writers. Bloom concludes her jeremiad of grading
policy by explaining that "grades are in big trouble"(364) because they
undermine good teaching, inhibit student discussion and response to course
material, look fixed and permanent, and are dishonest (362-366). Bloom
offers an alternative to common grading policy through a student-centered
approach in which the writers assign grades to themselves. Through discussion
groups, peer analysis, self-reflection, and autonomous revision, students
were able to validate each other's work, while not asking the professor
how she would evaluate their writing. In the case of nearly every student,
Bloom asserts that the student's self-evaluation was virtually identical
to the evaluation that she gave. While Bloom's allegation that grading
as most teachers have come to perceive it has its imperfections is accurate,
I do not agree with all aspects of her remedy. Certainly, the collaborative
student relationships that were generated by Bloom's model were beneficial,
but allowing students to grade themselves may have negative consequences
beyond those indicated by Bloom. The problems raised by time constraints,
the paper load, and unmotivated students all detract from the allure of
Bloom's model. But more importantly, it denies the value of authority and
expertise. While questioning a grade is certainly acceptable, it should
not be common practice. Indeed, we are welcome to question our bosses about
our salary from time to time, but not after every paycheck. Similarly,
writers must accept that the expert has a certain amount of authority that
must be honored when grades are given.
Greenberg, Karen L. "Grading, Evaluating, Assessing: Power and Politics
in College Composition." Rev. of Alternatives to Grading Student Writing
by Stephen Tchudi, ed. Situating Portfolios: Four Perspectives by
Kathleen Blake Yancey and Irwin Weiser, eds. and Assessment of Writing:
Politics, Policies, Practices by Edward M. White, William D. Lutz,
and Sandra Kamusikiri, eds. College Composition and Communication
49 (1998): 275-284.
A professor of English at Hunter College, CUNY, Greenberg has spent
much of her life in search of the most effective way to respond to student
writing. But, as she indicates, "I abruptly resigned from the 'assessment
business,' ending a 20-year run of research, scholarship, and political
activism focused on post-secondary writing evaluation"(275). In 1996, Karen
Greenberg, by then dismayed and jaded, removed herself from the 'assessment
business' for three reasons: "(1) current writing assessment practices
are bereft of theory and do not reflect what we know about how writing
is learned and taught; (2) too often, 'how to' information about the evaluation
of writing takes precedence over the questions of 'why' and 'what are the
social and political implications'; and (3) everyone involved in post-secondary
writing instruction and evaluation, including students' needs to think
much more carefully about how ideologies of writing assessment embody and
reinforce the dominant cultural forces that many of us seek to question
if not resist"(283). Greenberg also indicates that none of the authors
published in the books under her review explained explicitly the fact that
"grading disempowers students"(279). This inattention to the power dynamic
in writing is frustrating for Greenberg who believes that, "all grades,
evaluations, and assessments, no matter how naturalistic, contextualized,
multidimensional, and richly descriptive, are exercises in power-grading,
evaluating, and assessing always involves asymmetrical attempts to shape
experiences and identities, to control others, to establish or maintain
authority"(277). Greenberg's three problems with contemporary assessment
strategy, coupled with her explanation of the power dynamic in composition
evaluation have led me to the conclusion that as I examine assessment,
evaluation, and grading strategies I must remain aware of the theoretical
grounding, social implications, and power dynamics that underlie any approach
towards responding to student writing.
Guthrow, Mary B. "Writing at Reading: How a Junior Year in England Changes
Student Writers." Alternatives to Grading Student Writing. Ed. Stephen
Tchudi. Urbana: NCTE, 1997. 122-135.
Guthrow chronicles the intellectual transformation experienced by students
from Randolph-Macon Woman's College who spent their junior year studying
at the University of Reading. In general, students who experienced the
Reading program "did become much more comfortable with the process; they
all talked about new fluency and confidence as being the products of a
year of intensive writing in a pass/fail setting. In addition, these students
"developed a strong sense of ownership in their writing"(124). The students'
improvement in writing occurred as a result of three significant factors:
(1) Students were liberated by the pass/fail system that enabled them to
focus on ideas rather than technicalities. (2) Students were evaluated
primarily through their writing; no exams or quizzes were given. Students
at Reading read, wrote, and discussed the assigned texts. Consequently,
they needed to produce a tremendous quantity of writing over the duration
of a semester. (3) Oral response through weekly conferencing was the primary
means of shaping student writing. These individual sessions promoted student
interest and personal accountability (125-132). While a semester abroad
cannot be replicated at a private college preparatory school, Linsly can
learn a great deal from the Reading model. Indeed, teachers across Linsly's
curriculum should consider improving student writing through "more conferencing
and oral response throughout the composing process, and less marking of
drafts; more informal writing assignments, presented as a way of learning,
as a starting point for discussion or for further reading; a shift in focus
from mastery of forms to development of confidence and fluency through
intensive writing practice; and development of close, supportive relationships
among students and teachers as the basis for more shared assessment of
drafts"(134).
Holaday, Lynn. "Writing Students Need Coaches, Not Judges." Alternatives
to Grading Student Writing. Ed. Stephen Tchudi. Urbana: NCTE, 1997.
35-45.
Lynn Holaday presents an emotionally charged argument that
discredits and vilifies the practice of grading, especially in the context
of writing evaluation. She asserts that the primary obstacles hindering
student writing are traumatic writing experiences and negative attitudes,
each of which is misery caused by grading. Thus, in her thesis, Holaday
explains that, "I see changing them as the only really effective means
of improving my students' writing, and I see my most effective tool as
minimizing judgement, otherwise known as grading"(35). Unlike many other
anti-grade ideologists who ignore the opposition, Holaday strives to refute
every counter-claim that could be made. But, unfortunately, she is incredibly
loose with logic, and the result is rhetoric that is long on emotion and
Romantic optimism, but short on real world application. Her conviction
that ranking students through SAT's, GRE's, LSAT's, and other national
standards tests is more reliable than grades and class rank is not only
naíve, it is dangerous. Anyone who has spent even a minimal amount
of time researching the SAT realizes its multiple shortcomings, and that
in the end it measures little more than how well the student can take the
SAT. Holaday's belief that a "grade may be influenced or contaminated by
everything from flattery to a teacher's personal preferences, to a desire
to warn, to a fear of causing psychological harm," is no different than
evaluation, reward, and promotion systems that exist throughout American
society. Why should teachers nurture students in a non-evaluative, no-risk,
everyone-is-exactly-the-same environment only to release them to the lions?
Holaday's approach seems to have the potential to cause much more harm
than giving grades does. Furthermore, the dualism that she creates between
coaches and judges is preposterous. I have been an athlete all of my life,
and I coach three seasons of athletics at Linsly. To suggest that "Coaches
are on your side; judges are not. Coaches are friendly; judges are aloof.
Coaches want you to do well; judges don't care"(41), is to completely ignore
reality. Certainly coaches, and teachers who assign grades, are on the
student's side, can be friendly, and want the individual to succeed, but
they also judge. In fact, a coach's decision of who plays the bulk of the
minutes during a game is often a more biting judgement than giving a low
grade because it is completely visible. In any event, Holaday's explanation
moved me closer to realizing that for the purposes of the highly competitive
environment that Linsly promotes, I must discover alternative systems of
grading. Ironically enough, however, after all of the spin and rhetoric,
Holaday's alternative offers little more than a new way to label an 'A.'
Huot, Brian. "Toward a New Theory of Writing Assessment." College Composition
and Communication 47 (1996): 549-565.
Although this article is directed primarily toward people who
use and design placement tests that measure a wide field of students, (specifically
for the purposes of college scheduling, or broader national writing assessment
tests) the argument that Huot presents is valuable in the context of my
research for two reasons: (1) it asserts that "at present, assessment procedures
which attempt to fix objectively a student's ability to write are based
upon an outdated theory supported by an irrelevant epistemology"(551-552);
and (2) that any truly reliable or valid assessment of writing must "recognize
the importance of context, rhetoric, and other characteristics integral
to a specific purpose and institution"(552). These observations indicate
that writing teachers across the curriculum must focus writing assessment
on "a writer's ability to communicate within a particular context and to
a specific audience who needs to read this writing as part of a clearly
defined communicative event"(559). Huot reiterates the central premise
of his argument by explaining that, "Instead of generalizability, technical
rigor, and large scale measures that minimize context and aim for a standardization
of writing quality, these new products emphasize the context of the texts
being read, the position of the readers, and the local, practical standards
teachers and other stakeholders establish for written communication"(561).
Indeed, as we redefine the manner in which we will respond to student writing
across the curriculum at Linsly, we must focus less on an attempt to judge
objectively a particular writer, and instead be able to "describe the promise
and limitations of a writer working within a particular rhetorical and
linguistic context"(564). More importantly immediately, however, is that
while Huot has denounced ETS and other national testing companies throughout
his article, we must remember that those testing companies maintain the
integrity and validity of their writing assessment methods. As long as
the holistic assessment strategy is used by ETS, Linsly teachers must continue
to prepare students to produce the clearly organized, fact driven, thesis
based essays that are required for that communicative event, superficial
though it is. Of course, this is not to suggest that the style of writing
praised by ETS readers is the only style we will teach. Rather, it is a
mode of discourse that we must prepare our students to practice.
Jones, Kathleen. "Portfolio Assessment as an Alternative to Grading Student
Writing." Alternatives to Grading Student Writing. Ed. Stephen Tchudi.
Urbana: NCTE, 1997. 255-263.
Kathleen Jones asserts that "the writing portfolio is a structure
that will help simplify assessment and grading and at the same time help
make learning meaningful in our classrooms"(255). Jones' description of
the portfolio is appealing because of the potential it has to allow teachers
to track all phases of the students' writing process, "I want students
to follow through on any writing they undertake, so every piece of writing,
including the various drafts, self-assessments, peer responses, and teacher
response is included in the portfolio. Revisions, rewrites, and false starts
are also evident. This collection becomes a living, almost breathing, record
of a student's thinking as well as his or her growth, through self-assessment,
as a writer and learner"(255). While I agree with many of Jones's points
regarding the subtleties of portfolio assessment, I do take exception to
her idea that portfolio writing should not be assessed in any way until
the final conference. While refraining from comment is noble in theory,
it is far too often misinterpreted as teacher apathy. A student commented
recently that one of my colleagues was lazy because "he doesn't even look
at our stuff--it doesn't even seem like he cares what we write or if we
get any better." I believe that summative grades can wait, but I think
that students, especially high school students, require feedback to keep
them motivated. Finally, Jones' s emphasis on the portfolio conference
as a way to shift "the evaluation and assigning of grades from something
done by the teacher to the student to the perspective of a shared responsibility
in assessing what has been accomplished"(262) will certainly have a positive
effect when applied to writing instruction at Linsly.
Lindemann, Erika. A Rhetoric For Writing Teachers. 2nd ed. New York:
Oxford UP, 1987.
Originally published in 1982, Lindemann's text is now in its
third edition. Its staying power can be attributed to the pragmatic approach
that it uses as it introduces new teachers to all aspects of composition/rhetoric
instruction. Lindemann describes several methodologies for evaluating writing
in the same chapter that she describes methodologies for creating writing
assignments (chapter 13, pages 191-223). Her decision to combine these
separate components of writing instruction stems from her belief that "problems
in many papers may be the fault, not of the writer, but of the assignment"(191).
Lindemann explains further that, "Effective writing assignments encourage
students to define progressively more complex rhetorical problems. Since
students learn to write by writing, our responsibility is to control and
vary the rhetorical demands of writing tasks to give students practice
in adjusting relationships among writer, reader, and subject, manipulating
more and more complex variables"(193). She finalizes her explanation of
effective writing assignments by suggesting that all assignments must account
for: "(1) The students' interest in and understanding of the subject; (2)
The purpose or aim of the composition; (3) The audience (which needn't
always be the teacher); (4) A role for the student to take with respect
to the subject and audience: (5) The form of discourse (which needn't always
be an essay)"(194). Lindemann also recommends that teachers should consider
this heuristic for designing writing assignments, "(1) What do I want the
students to do? (2) How do I want them to do the assignment? (3) For whom
are the students writing? (4) When will students do the assignment? (5)
What will I do with the assignment?"(196). After establishing the components
of a satisfactory writing assignment, Lindemann explains the merit of both
atomistic and holistic evaluation. She then describes a detailed, eleven-step
approach to "Teaching Through Comments on Student Papers"(216-219). Writing
teachers at Linsly can learn, or be reminded of, two very important techniques
described by Lindemann. First, writing assignments must be carefully crafted
and articulated to ensure student understanding. And second, we must respond
to papers in a way that enhances learning. Specifically, in our comments
to students we must use leading questions to help them solve problems,
provide solutions for labeled problems, praise all positive aspects of
the writing, avoid rewriting the paper for them, and we must create a careful
endnote to summarize our comments and to establish a goal for the next
draft of the paper.
Massa, Janis. "Alternative Assessment of Second-Language Writing: A Developmental
Model." Alternatives to Grading Student Writing. Ed. Stephen Tchudi.
Urbana: NCTE, 1997. 77-89.
Massa explains that there "is a need to redefine the objectives of
writing assessment, moving it from a punitive, gatekeeping tool that measures
deficits, to a facilitative tool that informs novice academic writers of
the characteristics of clear expression of thought, informs teachers of
students' potential, and informs the classroom curriculum"(87). She elaborates
further that the "ultimate goal of the developmental writing assessment
model presented here is to prepare students to meet the rigors of academic
language and thought"(87). The model that Massa presents is of particular
interest to all teachers at Linsly. Indeed, Linsly has a significant number
of ESL Korean students, and many teachers at Linsly have a difficult time
deciding how to evaluate their writing. Massa suggests that teachers should
instruct writing by building on the success of students. In the example
she provides, Massa demonstrates how one of her students demonstrated multiple
levels of critical thinking in one piece of writing, "She recognized her
initial insights while at the same time moving from personal to abstract
thought. She ends by connecting the issues found in the literature to issues
found in her personal lifeóand accomplishes all of this in English"(85).
Most importantly, Massa urges teachers of ESL students to move beyond a
quantified evaluation model that evaluates surface errors (87). Certainly,
the Developmental Model works in coordination with the techniques used
by most of us who have had success with the ESL students. Valuing content
over presentation, paying attention to the thought process rather than
the mechanics, and emphasizing successes are strategies that many of us
already use. Janis Massa's model helps to confirm our approach.
McGann, Patrick. "'Well, Think Again!': Remarking On Grading, Subject Positions,
And Writing Pedagogy."Composition Studies 25.2 (1997): 19-30.
From Joseph Harris' "Person, Position, Style," to Jacqueline Jones
Royster's "When the First Voice You Hear Is Not Your Own," the conversation
based on subject position has been fueled by several of the most prominent
contemporary composition theorists. Patrick McGann joins that conversation
in "Well, Think Again!" His premise is "that any teacher of writing is
no less conflicted than any student of writing, and that conflicting subject
positions come into play when a student writes and a teacher evaluates
and grades her paper"(19). He argues further that common practice in teaching
composition seems to interest itself more in who teachers want their students
to be rather than what they want their students to write (19). While McGann's
examination of the interpolated writing instructor (liberatory composition
teacher and conservative composition instructor) is valuable in the sense
that it demonstrates the political implications of teaching and evaluating
composition, his argument failed to convince me of anything because he
never indicates what the function of teaching writing is in the first place.
Thus, while he chides high school teachers who are still "trapped in the
modes of 'teacherly' pedagogy renounced by those of us at the universities
years ago" (22) and commends teachers who recognize that, "students are
a mix of selves and subject positions, their papers will, of course, be
a mix of voices, which presents an opportunity to discuss the issue of
voice, rather than an opportunity to penalize the transgression of social
science discourse" he never suggests what the result of either approach
will be. In fact, all that we know for certain from the article is that
Patrick McGann endured an extremely rigid high school English program that
demanded "proper grammar and mechanics" (20) and now he is a published
scholar in the field of composition studies. The value of McGann's presentation
in relation to composition evaluation at Linsly is that while we must adhere
to our conviction that genre, purpose, audience, organization, grammar,
mechanics, and etc. are fundamental to sound composition, the respect for
interpolated selves and multiple subject positions must also be maintained.
O'Hagan, Liesel K. "It's Broken, Fix It!" Alternatives to Grading Student
Writing. Ed. Stephen Tchudi. Urbana: NCTE, 1997. 3-13.
O'Hagan indicates that "studies as early as 1912 questioned
the validity of grading, suggesting that in writing instruction, in particular,
grades were far too subjective"(4). She bases her study on the thesis that,
"despite extensive research, educators are no more successful at grading
in the current system of education than they were a century and a half
ago"(5). Most distressing, perhaps, is her assertion that grades do little
more than teach failure (5). She insists that by giving grades teachers
are labeling students at varying degrees of inadequacy. O'Hagan supports
her thesis by using current research to indicate six reasons why grading
is problematic: (1) Scientific Invalidity; (2) False Motivation; (3) False
Indicators of Worth; (4) Superficial Learning; (5) Student/Teacher Barriers;
and (6) Limits on Teaching and Teachers (6-12). While this essay serves
as a fine introduction to a larger group of essays that promote alternative
means of writing assessment, it is problematic in its own assertion. O'Hagan
does nothing to answer her critics who believe that there is value in assigning
grades; a significant problem considering that Linsly derives a great deal
of satisfaction from the fact that its teachers, in all subjects, give
accurate grades that have not suffered from inflation. She does not acknowledge
the fact that most of the working men and women in American society are
given various levels of compensation for the work that they do, and that
while such circumstances may lead to false motivation and barriers, it
is the way capitalist economies work. Again, whether we like grades in
theory or not, educators must have a clear objective, and part of that
objective (at least at American college preparatory schools) must be to
prepare students for the rigors of higher education and life in American
society. To this end, grades are meaningful.
Pribyl, Rick. "Unlocking Outcome Based Education through the Writing Process."
Alternatives to Grading Student Writing. Ed. Stephen Tchudi. Urbana:
NCTE, 1997. 244-253.
In this article, Rick Pribyl describes the "Accept/Revise Evaluation"
strategy. Similar to other innovative grading methods, Pribyl's "Accept/Revise"
method originated in his dissatisfaction with the ambiguity inherent in
borderline grades (what separates an B+ from an A- for example). The Accept/Revise
method developed further because of Pribyl's interest in "Outcome-Based
Education"(244). After the student has completed the writing process (prewriting,
several drafts, and a final copy), he/she turns in all of the applicable
work. The teacher then reads all of the material from the writing process,
making comments, suggesting corrections, and then at the end of the paper
he/she writes one of three words: (1) Accepted: the paper is the best product
possible for that particular student. The student is finished with the
assignment and receives 100/100 points. (2) Revise: the student is capable
of better writing. Recurring problems exist, and mistakes are evident.
The paper is returned and a certain number of points are deducted. Using
this system it is possible to make mistakes, be held accountable for them,
but still have the opportunity to earn a respectable grade. Pribyl suggests
deducting ten points for each revision, but if I were to use this method
I would deduct only five. (3) Reject: If the student has failed to follow,
or has not completed the assignment, he/she must begin again. Pribyl indicates
that this status is given quite infrequently (247). I like this method
of grading and can see it working across the curriculum at Linsly for two
reasons: (1) "due to all the constant writing in the class, some students
find themselves working on several writing projects simultaneously. It
does not take very long for many of the writers to learn to produce a good
product on the first final draft, so as not to be overly burdened with
work"(248). Clearly, the accept/revise method rewards quality work, and
it maintains hope for those who are struggling through a project. (2) The
accept/revise method reflects "the real world." "In the workplace, if an
employee writes a bad report for any reason, it will usually be sent back
to him to redo or else he'll be fired"(249). While this is rather harsh,
and has certain unstated implications involving voice and growth (I'm thinking
of Joseph Harris here), it does demand a disciplined, systematic, means
to an end that it valuable in its own respect.
Reising, Bob. "The Formative Assessment of Writing." The Clearing House
71.2 (1997): 71-72.
In this very brief endorsement of formative assessment, Bob Reising
illustrates six key points that will empower teachers to help their students
improve their writing. He argues that the "writing process works"(71) and
that a teacher's call for multiple drafts of a paper provides several opportunities
for teaching and learning. He explains that "intensive evaluation is seldom
desirable"(71) and that a "few well-selected reactions usually advance
a piece, and a writer, far faster than does a torrent of questions"(71).
He suggests further that students should look for alternative readers of
their work, recognizing that composition can be shaped effectively by people
other than the teacher who assigned the work. He asserts that writing should
be taught in every classroom because, "writing is a way of knowing and
of coming to know"(71); a judgement that sounds very similar to this one
made by James Berlin in his article, "Contemporary Composition: The Major
Pedagogical Theories": "We are teaching a way of experiencing the world,
a way of ordering and making sense of it"(The Writing Teachers Sourcebook
20). Finally, Reising maintains that students should be aware of resources
available to them, and that they should understand the purpose of the writing
task, "A writing teacher, every teacher, has no more important task than
to prove that communication and education 'work,' that they are the avenues
leading to success and fulfillment in the contemporary world"(72). Reising's
analysis works as a Cliff's Notes version of formative assessment. But,
all of his points demand much more careful attention. For my purposes,
this two-page article serves as a comforting explanation of formative assessment
for colleagues who seldom assign writing tasks to their students. Such
an article values their expertise as educators, while giving them some
guidelines for helpful assessment.
Young, Gail M. "Using a Multidimensional Scoring Guide: A Win-Win Situation."
Alternatives to Grading Student Writing. Ed. Stephen Tchudi. Urbana:
NCTE, 1997. 225-231.
Gail Young's "Multidimensional Scoring Guide" is simply a rubric. Yet,
it is reassuring that after thirty years in the 'assessment business' she
values the rubric for the same reasons that I do. Young endorses the rubric
because it motivates students toward top performance, provides guidance
in the plan for improvement, and it validates grades (226-230). Specifically,
Young adapted the traditional composition evaluation rubric for the assessment
of poetry declamation. As Young explains, "The grade for the project was
a combination of a student's self-assessment, peer assessments, and my
assessment. An average of all assessments (mine weighted equally) produced
the score or grade"(226). The rubric method is similar to the achievement
grading technique as explained by Adkinson and Tchudi, except that more
specific (and perhaps subjective) values are assigned for the completion
of each prescribed task under the rubric. Young's success with the multidimensional
scoring guide is similar to mine in that both of our students openly praise
the rubric because as one of her students indicated, "I really like the
idea of having the concrete expectations for an assignment and to know
exactly what I needed to do to get the grade I wanted"(228). Aside from
the ongoing portfolio-based writing assignments which are perhaps graded
best by the Adkinson and Tchudi achievement grading method, the evaluation
of content-based, summative writing assignments should be based on a rubric
that students understand before the writing process begins. This is true
in English as well as other disciplines across the curriculum.
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